I was having a wonderful time at the fire when my owner's gardener came in. I did not bark and I was ashamed from that. Little did I know that he was a gambler who needed money. He and I went to the train station. He handed the leash to some stranger which I attacked but failed. He choked me with a leash. I fainted. What is going to happen to me now?
It grabbed my attention.
ReplyDeleteYou could make it longer.
I liked how it grabbed my attention.
Make it longer.